Comments on: The Forty-Dollar Lay http://www.dogpoet.com/blog/archives/518 Marking Territory since 2001 Thu, 20 Nov 2008 08:16:48 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.0.4 by: Benedict http://www.dogpoet.com/blog/archives/518#comment-890 Thu, 04 Jan 2007 13:36:03 +0000 http://www.dogpoet.com/blog/archives/518#comment-890 And you just keep being a joy to behold! Just devoured my second extract. If I may be so bold, it's like I can see myself there in you, your experiences so vivid and so familiar - even if on the other side of the Atlantic. Think you've got me hooked. And you just keep being a joy to behold!

Just devoured my second extract. If I may be so bold, it’s like I can see myself there in you, your experiences so vivid and so familiar - even if on the other side of the Atlantic. Think you’ve got me hooked.

]]> by: Jim http://www.dogpoet.com/blog/archives/518#comment-80 Fri, 03 Nov 2006 03:52:30 +0000 http://www.dogpoet.com/blog/archives/518#comment-80 My feeling as I read this was that it seemed natural. It could have been a man and a woman. I accepted the moment without criticism. The writer is a part of something although it is not what he sees as he rides in the cab. Yet he will regret what he did. He seems lonely, apart, separated. It seems that his eventual choice, if I am putting things together correctly, is one that he evolved into and toward: bondage, submission, pain. As a master of one, I understand and trust that choice. As "kinky" as it may be termed, it goes deeper than the casual sex he has just experienced. It is at times sublime. This writer is not an average guy. He is talented and has made intelligent use of his private life in this piece. The incident is brief and has a subtle level of suspense. My feeling as I read this was that it seemed natural.
It could have been a man and a woman. I accepted
the moment without criticism. The writer is a part
of something although it is not what he sees as he rides in the cab. Yet he will regret what he did.
He seems lonely, apart, separated. It seems that
his eventual choice, if I am putting things together
correctly, is one that he evolved into and toward:
bondage, submission, pain. As a master of one, I
understand and trust that choice. As “kinky” as it
may be termed, it goes deeper than the casual
sex he has just experienced. It is at times sublime. This writer
is not an average guy. He is talented and has
made intelligent use of his private life in this
piece. The incident is brief and has a subtle level
of suspense.

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